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« on: January 04, 2008, 05:50:37 PM » |
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Well here's some of my art like usual....  I really wish I had a scanner cause I've gone through quite alot of sketchsbooks over the last year or two. Oh well if we get luckly I'll have another picture up before the end of the month. |
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« Last Edit: January 04, 2008, 06:16:27 PM by Saaji »
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« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2008, 06:17:25 PM » |
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I like it!  It makes me want to get up and move around because it has so much motion! For a minor improvement, make the raised leg just a little longer and you're golden. If you were to imagine that leg stretched out straight, it might be a little short. Shading would also be really nice~! Dooooo it! Awesome job, Saaji! |
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Saaji
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« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 04:52:53 AM » |
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Well it's been a while... Family group shot!!!!
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« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 05:45:11 PM » |
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Ok, you have for the most part, a solid understanding of anatomy, with the ocassional exception of not knowing where your weight lies along with legs and arms disappearing when passing by an object. Your shoulders, like most novices, are protruding from the torso. If you look at an anatomy book, you will find that the shoulders are a part of the upper torso that goes up from the waist like a V. The deltoid sits on top of the shoulder joint and goes into the bicept and trisecpt.
Before you decide on an action post, next time, answer these questions.
1. What is he doing?
2. What direction is he going?
3. Why is he doing it?
Right now, your action pose looks like a pose that has no real purpose or direction, and that's what is confusing me. Right now he looks off balence, in part because we don't see a direction, and his footing isn't balenced on the one foot on the ground.
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« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2008, 04:18:10 PM » |
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For your family group shot, it looks like the male's left leg has just disappeared. I don't think it would be behind the female, and if it is behind the boy, I am pretty sure I would at least see a part of his shoe on the floor. Maybe if you could kindly point out to me where it is?  |
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« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2008, 07:51:14 PM » |
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 Yea.... your right. There's a reason why you dont draw when slightly intoxicated....you forgot to draw some parts. Hah hah, well the next thing I add will be complete lol
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Saaji
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« Reply #6 on: September 29, 2008, 03:03:49 PM » |
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« Reply #7 on: September 29, 2008, 04:23:37 PM » |
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Funny, you have the same problems I'm trying to wrinkle out.  I'll start with Max, I can't help but feel that he looks kind of flat, I don't mean like scrawny or anything like that, more like a person that was cut out of paper feel, I see it more in the upper body then anywhere else on this one. Tatsumi looks like his left foot (our point of view) is tippy toeing rather than looking he's in the air, the arm that threw the Kunai is a little short, roughly it should be around the middle of the thighs. Sakura her upper body is tilted in an odd way, unless that was intentional then ok then. For Ryu Williams, check the length of both his legs, they don't seem to be the same length, one looks shorter then the other. Sanosuke, Rurouni Kenshin reference? Stuart, his head looks a little big, males tend to be 7 heads tall rather then 6 heads tall like the way you have it. Sajj, check his leg lengths, there a little off from what I see. |
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Saaji
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« Reply #8 on: September 29, 2008, 05:28:36 PM » |
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Saaji
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« Reply #11 on: October 26, 2008, 06:49:14 PM » |
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Guess what I've got some more art to show... since I forgot my flash drive while scanning i've got only mid res quality images since photobucket likes to down size images.... hopefully ill get around to penning and inking these in the near future Here's the first one, the hero and heroine side by side in their cadet uniforms... this is going to be pre-start of the story and used really only in flash backs.  I'm still designing Kasumi's outfit... this isnt a very good image but it gets what I want to show for her outfit....  Here we've got random folk from my world of Kooron the top left is a mercenary commander from Azania a continent thats going to have many African and Arabic influences in it... The guy in the top right is a soldier from Cyprus which is the technology giant of the world and is gonna be very America like... they young guy in the bottom left is a priest in training from Theikos the religious holier then thou continent, the last guy is a noble/warrior from Zaire from Zaire another continent that is going to have a very 15th-18th century europe feel to it  The next three are various poses of my main character Max...    All the main characters from the first half of my Kooron story... from the left going to the right. Lee the disgruntled mercenary and rival to Max. Wulfe an experienced merceny from Azania, he's Max's partner of a couple years. Max the main character whom the story focuses on. Kasumi a childhood friend of Max, graduated in the same class as him, she has a very on and off again relationship with Max. PJ young archer prodigy, he's Max's younger cousin. 
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« Reply #12 on: October 26, 2008, 10:48:16 PM » |
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Whoa! I REALLY love the first one of max! Really, REALLY love that perspective, awesome job there! And....: : ninja knight babes? |
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« Reply #14 on: November 06, 2008, 05:19:35 PM » |
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Hey! Thanks a lot man! Though there are a few adjustments I think I'll request via PM. ^^;;
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 SUZAKU KI- ...Wait, WTF?!Farewell Fire Emblem Sanctuary of Strategy... it's been a good ride. |
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Tir
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« Reply #15 on: November 07, 2008, 01:44:55 AM » |
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Hey! Thanks a lot man! Though there are a few adjustments I think I'll request via PM. ^^;;
Artist. Abuser. Typical. Anyway,...I really like Jace, he looks adorable :) though....his short cape is kind of itching me (why have a cape when it's that short?) but that might just be my cracked logic of capes. What hair color/eye color does he have though? : D also, Jace Navarre? XD You crack me up. |
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« Reply #17 on: November 07, 2008, 12:03:13 PM » |
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Artist. Abuser.
Typical.
Hey, I resent that!  Anyways, Saaji, I appreciate the pic. I sent in the other guy's profile. Is that well? |
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SUZAKU KI- ...Wait, WTF?!Farewell Fire Emblem Sanctuary of Strategy... it's been a good ride.
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« Reply #18 on: November 07, 2008, 12:10:57 PM » |
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I got it.
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« Reply #19 on: November 07, 2008, 01:35:51 PM » |
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I need to say something else. I reread the thread with some thought, and I gotta say...
Saaji, I apologize if I seem that imposing too much on you at once. And I also apologize for that little remark I made. It was rather wrong of me, and I'm sorry if I offended you.
Yes, I was like that in the past, I was a bit more harassing than I realized I was. Thus I feel I owe an apology to anzuswordmaster and Tirinity for my past harassment. I came to realize how inconsiderate I was back then.
That said, Saaji. All I have are just three characters I need artwork of, however, if you do not wish to do any further requests from me, that's fine.
Again, I apologize.
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SUZAKU KI- ...Wait, WTF?!Farewell Fire Emblem Sanctuary of Strategy... it's been a good ride.
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